<ul>
<li>&quot;Tokyo-based&quot; in 0.1
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<li><blockquote>
Cybozu, a Tokyo-based global software company.
</blockquote>
</li>
<li>I think &quot;Tokyo-based&quot; is not important</li>
<li>How about: &quot;Cybozu, a global software company that provides web-based groupware services.&quot;</li>
<li>Or, If you intended to show the author is in east-asian culture, &quot;Cybozu, a global software company founded in Japan&quot;</li>
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</li>
<li>&quot;articulate&quot; in 0.1.2
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<li><blockquote>
I was able to translate what I was doing unconsciously into words
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</li>
<li><blockquote>
I was able to articulate what I was doing unconsciously
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</li>
<li>The word &quot;articulate&quot; looks a little difficult for non-native
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<li>&quot;there is an opposite opinion.&quot; in 0.1.2
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<li>Sould it be &quot;there are some opposite opinions.&quot; ?</li>
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