Feedback 1

• "Tokyo-based" in 0.1

  • Cybozu, a Tokyo-based global software company.

  • I think "Tokyo-based" is not important
  • How about: "Cybozu, a global software company that provides web-based groupware services."
  • Or, If you intended to show the author is in east-asian culture, "Cybozu, a global software company founded in Japan"

• "articulate" in 0.1.2

• I was able to translate what I was doing unconsciously into words

• I was able to articulate what I was doing unconsciously

• The word "articulate" looks a little difficult for non-native

• "there is an opposite opinion." in 0.1.2

  • Sould it be "there are some opposite opinions." ?

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